Trivia. FA no likey Trivia. Intergrate the most interesting and important parts of the Trivia section into the body of the article, and to hell with the rest.
Plot. Intergrate the sub-plot section into the the main plot. If every film article had a seperate section for each sub-plot, well, the
Revenge of the Sith article would be a mess.
Trailers and TV spots. Don't list and provide links to every single goddamned one. Just write a summary about "Promotion" or "Release". Get rid of this section
Connections to SII. Prosify. Lists are bad for FA
Allegories and Allusions (specific to other lore). Rename to Cultural Allusions, and prosify.
Back-References. What is this? Get it out of here!
Spin offs. No. Get rid of this, maybe have seperate sections on Video game, novel, ect, with each section providing a link to the respective main article
Production needs more references, I would merge Marlon Brando's role into the cast description, once you model the section after other FAs.
Deleted scenes needs to be expanded and referenced.
Trailers and TV spots is no good, create a section on promotion or something. Get rid of as many ex.links in the text as possible.
Reactions is not very good. See other FAs.
Box office results needs tyo be expanded or moved into a cleaned up Reactions.
Merge IMAX 3D release into my proposed Promotion/Release section.
Connections to Superman and Superman II must be turned into paragraphs, and have a few references.
Same goes for Allegories and Allusions (specific to other lore).
Trivia, removeentirely, and grab what is actually useful content, merge it into appropriate sections.
Other back-references, merge into Ref. to Sup. I and II (change title to ref. to other Sup. media?)
Change the title of Spin-offs, though keep them together, as if you seperate them, they will all be too short. No dot points. Perhaps merge Documentary into here as well, or more appropriately, into Promotion/Release.
Trivia. FA no likey Trivia. Intergrate the most interesting and important parts of the Trivia section into the body of the article, and to hell with the rest.
Plot. Intergrate the sub-plot section into the the main plot. If every film article had a seperate section for each sub-plot, well, the
Revenge of the Sith article would be a mess.
Trailers and TV spots. Don't list and provide links to every single goddamned one. Just write a summary about "Promotion" or "Release". Get rid of this section
Connections to SII. Prosify. Lists are bad for FA
Allegories and Allusions (specific to other lore). Rename to Cultural Allusions, and prosify.
Back-References. What is this? Get it out of here!
Spin offs. No. Get rid of this, maybe have seperate sections on Video game, novel, ect, with each section providing a link to the respective main article
Production needs more references, I would merge Marlon Brando's role into the cast description, once you model the section after other FAs.
Deleted scenes needs to be expanded and referenced.
Trailers and TV spots is no good, create a section on promotion or something. Get rid of as many ex.links in the text as possible.
Reactions is not very good. See other FAs.
Box office results needs tyo be expanded or moved into a cleaned up Reactions.
Merge IMAX 3D release into my proposed Promotion/Release section.
Connections to Superman and Superman II must be turned into paragraphs, and have a few references.
Same goes for Allegories and Allusions (specific to other lore).
Trivia, removeentirely, and grab what is actually useful content, merge it into appropriate sections.
Other back-references, merge into Ref. to Sup. I and II (change title to ref. to other Sup. media?)
Change the title of Spin-offs, though keep them together, as if you seperate them, they will all be too short. No dot points. Perhaps merge Documentary into here as well, or more appropriately, into Promotion/Release.