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I've listed this article for peer review because I want it promoted to
Featured Article.
Thanks, Kodster ( heLLo) ( Me did that) 22:16, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Ealdgyth ( talk · contribs)
Ruhrfisch comments: Since I have reviewed this twice already, I am not sure I have the distance to review this well, but here are some suggestions for improvement. There are pretty nit-pickyIf you want more comments, please ask here.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 03:14, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I want it promoted to
Featured Article.
Thanks, Kodster ( heLLo) ( Me did that) 22:16, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Ealdgyth ( talk · contribs)
Ruhrfisch comments: Since I have reviewed this twice already, I am not sure I have the distance to review this well, but here are some suggestions for improvement. There are pretty nit-pickyIf you want more comments, please ask here.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 03:14, 14 October 2008 (UTC)