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I want to get this to FA status if possible. I have addressed all points raised at the previous FAC review which was archived due to lake of commentary. I would like to be notified of any remaining issues with this article, so I can fix them before taking this back to FAC.
Thanks in advance, REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 13:46, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
I don't own the books in refs 1 and 5, but apart from that I have access to all the sources. Hope that won't be a problem for any reviewers. Cheers! REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 14:18, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
I was on the verge of joining in the FAC, but I can see why this has been brought back to PR. One major concern I have is the lack of references to the books written on him. I count at least three (auto)biographies that have been released, but they're very sparsely used here and some of the sections (early life for example) would benefit greatly from these. One of them is available freely HERE at the Internet Archive if that helps. A quick search brings up some basic facts that I would generally expect to be included too, he attended Cardinal Heenan Catholic High School, [1] he has an older brother (from the book), the names of his parents [2] etc. Kosack ( talk) 08:33, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
Some tips from me with your references:
Thanks, LM150 20:36, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
I apologize for being short on time, limited commentary:
That's all I have time for; good luck! SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 17:36, 14 January 2021 (UTC)
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I want to get this to FA status if possible. I have addressed all points raised at the previous FAC review which was archived due to lake of commentary. I would like to be notified of any remaining issues with this article, so I can fix them before taking this back to FAC.
Thanks in advance, REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 13:46, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
I don't own the books in refs 1 and 5, but apart from that I have access to all the sources. Hope that won't be a problem for any reviewers. Cheers! REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 14:18, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
I was on the verge of joining in the FAC, but I can see why this has been brought back to PR. One major concern I have is the lack of references to the books written on him. I count at least three (auto)biographies that have been released, but they're very sparsely used here and some of the sections (early life for example) would benefit greatly from these. One of them is available freely HERE at the Internet Archive if that helps. A quick search brings up some basic facts that I would generally expect to be included too, he attended Cardinal Heenan Catholic High School, [1] he has an older brother (from the book), the names of his parents [2] etc. Kosack ( talk) 08:33, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
Some tips from me with your references:
Thanks, LM150 20:36, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
I apologize for being short on time, limited commentary:
That's all I have time for; good luck! SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 17:36, 14 January 2021 (UTC)