Soliciting feedback on this article, which I'm hoping to improve to FA eventually. The article has had a previous peer review here; it was listed by another editor when I was on a bit of a wikibreak, so unfortuately I was unaware of it and unable to respond to comments. I've improved the issues that were raised since then, so hope you'll give this a second look. Thanks in advance, -- Bailey (talk) 02:35, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Great job, personally I did not find any problems with the article. Good luck at FAC! - Tutmosis 19:09, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- I agree, good job. But check Wikipedia:Manual of Style. For the most part it's free of flaws, but for example you should avoid double hyphens (--) when you should be using an em-dash (—). - Amatulic 22:24, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 22:36, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Thank you to everyone, including Andy Z's hardworking script. I'm going to start working on those automated suggestions tonight, and the em-dashes too. -- Bailey (talk) 22:58, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
Soliciting feedback on this article, which I'm hoping to improve to FA eventually. The article has had a previous peer review here; it was listed by another editor when I was on a bit of a wikibreak, so unfortuately I was unaware of it and unable to respond to comments. I've improved the issues that were raised since then, so hope you'll give this a second look. Thanks in advance, -- Bailey (talk) 02:35, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Great job, personally I did not find any problems with the article. Good luck at FAC! - Tutmosis 19:09, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- I agree, good job. But check Wikipedia:Manual of Style. For the most part it's free of flaws, but for example you should avoid double hyphens (--) when you should be using an em-dash (—). - Amatulic 22:24, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 22:36, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Thank you to everyone, including Andy Z's hardworking script. I'm going to start working on those automated suggestions tonight, and the em-dashes too. -- Bailey (talk) 22:58, 31 October 2006 (UTC)