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This article about the much-loved singer and actor (Doolittle in My Fair Lady) and monologist is mostly the work of
User:Cassianto, with whose approval I am putting it forward for peer review. Cassianto has researched the subject widely, and, following some recent editing and additions by me and a very thorough copy editing by
User:Ssilvers, the comments of Wiki-colleagues are sought, with a view to Cassianto's putting the article forward for promotion to GA in due course.
Tim riley (
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07:24, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments: This is an interesting article. I'm a bit busy, so my detailed review will have to be in instalments. Here is he first tranche:-
Good! Thank you very much for these. I'll consult the editor chiefly responsible for the article and report back soonest. No rush for second tranche. Tim riley ( talk) 07:39, 3 May 2011 (UTC)
More to come Brianboulton ( talk) 10:04, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
I have edited all of the points kindly raised by Brianboulton to the best of my ability and I have deleted the sentences "Dividing his time between Clacton on sea and the Capital" and "Bringing down the enemy plane and capturing the crew" as i cannot specify further. Both of these sentences are in the autobiography but SH did not elaborate further than that so I have removed them all together. Incidentally, the picture of SH aged 10 does have a line written directly underneath the photo stating "Here I am aged ten, the solemn, Eton collared Boy Soprano. The first rung..." If he was ten at this point then this would have been taken c. 1900/ 1901 well before 1923, this would be the only proof in order to date the photo. Cassianto ( talk) 21:44, 3 May 2011 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
This article about the much-loved singer and actor (Doolittle in My Fair Lady) and monologist is mostly the work of
User:Cassianto, with whose approval I am putting it forward for peer review. Cassianto has researched the subject widely, and, following some recent editing and additions by me and a very thorough copy editing by
User:Ssilvers, the comments of Wiki-colleagues are sought, with a view to Cassianto's putting the article forward for promotion to GA in due course.
Tim riley (
talk)
07:24, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments: This is an interesting article. I'm a bit busy, so my detailed review will have to be in instalments. Here is he first tranche:-
Good! Thank you very much for these. I'll consult the editor chiefly responsible for the article and report back soonest. No rush for second tranche. Tim riley ( talk) 07:39, 3 May 2011 (UTC)
More to come Brianboulton ( talk) 10:04, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
I have edited all of the points kindly raised by Brianboulton to the best of my ability and I have deleted the sentences "Dividing his time between Clacton on sea and the Capital" and "Bringing down the enemy plane and capturing the crew" as i cannot specify further. Both of these sentences are in the autobiography but SH did not elaborate further than that so I have removed them all together. Incidentally, the picture of SH aged 10 does have a line written directly underneath the photo stating "Here I am aged ten, the solemn, Eton collared Boy Soprano. The first rung..." If he was ten at this point then this would have been taken c. 1900/ 1901 well before 1923, this would be the only proof in order to date the photo. Cassianto ( talk) 21:44, 3 May 2011 (UTC)