Going for FAC really soon. I would like some last minute comments to fix any problems that would stop it from getting FA status, thx. M3tal H3ad 03:05, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
Seems pretty good, but take care to give it a thorough copyedit (I spotted a couple of missing apostrophes on a skim through). There are also occasionally a run of short sentences, which breaks the flow. Also, is there nothing that can be mentioned about their influences, and the influence they had on other bands? The lead seems a bit superlative, as it is not explained later how they led a movement or defined a genre; it needs references. Trebor 19:37, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
Going for FAC really soon. I would like some last minute comments to fix any problems that would stop it from getting FA status, thx. M3tal H3ad 03:05, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
Seems pretty good, but take care to give it a thorough copyedit (I spotted a couple of missing apostrophes on a skim through). There are also occasionally a run of short sentences, which breaks the flow. Also, is there nothing that can be mentioned about their influences, and the influence they had on other bands? The lead seems a bit superlative, as it is not explained later how they led a movement or defined a genre; it needs references. Trebor 19:37, 11 January 2007 (UTC)