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I've listed this article for peer review because…
I believe that it's about time for a death metal band of such respectability and signifigance to get up to GA status. I've rewritten the page pretty much from scrap, and already it is much more informative and detailed. Thanks, Dark Executioner ( talk) 21:03, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
It's got a long way until it reaches GA, first thing i notice;
*1995−1997
Six Feet Under released their first album on - this is the first sentence of the history section. How was the band formed?, how did they meet?, who are the members of the band?, who plays what?, how did they get signed?
The main thing is the article lacks detail and just covers what the band released, and original research of the style of the song.
M3tal H3ad (
talk)
09:42, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
Done, but still working on the POV stuff. Thanks! Dark Executioner ( talk) 17:07, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
Good to see you focus in on an article! This one does need a bit of work, but it's a great way to become familiar with the GA/FA process.
Good luck, and let me know if you need clarification or help with anything! \m/ Skeletor2112 ( talk) 12:48, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
I think I've received the most benefit from your advice, Skeletor. You're really patient with helping me with this thing and I appreciate it. \m/ I'm still working on making the article more neutral in tone, however. Dark Executioner ( talk) 17:11, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
I would have basically stated everything these guys have but there are some other things I noticed.
— Burningclean [ Speak the truth! 22:36, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
Done, but I would still like help on formatting some of the sources, if they have not been done already. Dark Executioner ( talk) 17:11, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because…
I believe that it's about time for a death metal band of such respectability and signifigance to get up to GA status. I've rewritten the page pretty much from scrap, and already it is much more informative and detailed. Thanks, Dark Executioner ( talk) 21:03, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
It's got a long way until it reaches GA, first thing i notice;
*1995−1997
Six Feet Under released their first album on - this is the first sentence of the history section. How was the band formed?, how did they meet?, who are the members of the band?, who plays what?, how did they get signed?
The main thing is the article lacks detail and just covers what the band released, and original research of the style of the song.
M3tal H3ad (
talk)
09:42, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
Done, but still working on the POV stuff. Thanks! Dark Executioner ( talk) 17:07, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
Good to see you focus in on an article! This one does need a bit of work, but it's a great way to become familiar with the GA/FA process.
Good luck, and let me know if you need clarification or help with anything! \m/ Skeletor2112 ( talk) 12:48, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
I think I've received the most benefit from your advice, Skeletor. You're really patient with helping me with this thing and I appreciate it. \m/ I'm still working on making the article more neutral in tone, however. Dark Executioner ( talk) 17:11, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
I would have basically stated everything these guys have but there are some other things I noticed.
— Burningclean [ Speak the truth! 22:36, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
Done, but I would still like help on formatting some of the sources, if they have not been done already. Dark Executioner ( talk) 17:11, 15 March 2008 (UTC)