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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get an idea of how much work would be required to get this article up to FA status. It is currently a GA and has not been seriously peer reviewed before, it would therefore be very useful to have other editors opinion on the article. There are several editors that are willing to address any issues that may arise / make the necessary alterations to improve the quality of this article which addresses an important area of modern clinical psychology.
cheers,
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03:10, 9 February 2011 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This is very good, seems comprehensive to a non-expert (me), and well-supported. I see some overlinking and some problems with pronouns but otherwise not much to grumble about. Here are my suggestions:
Overlinking
Heads and subheads
Lead
Classification
Signs and symptoms
Mental illness
Pathophysiology
Self-harm awareness
Avoidance techniques
Images
References
Further reading
Other
Please make sure that the existing text includes no copyright violations, plagiarism, or close paraphrasing. For more information on this please see Wikipedia:Wikipedia_Signpost/2009-04-13/Dispatches. (This is a general warning given in view of previous problems that have risen over copyvios.)
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 20:31, 16 February 2011 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get an idea of how much work would be required to get this article up to FA status. It is currently a GA and has not been seriously peer reviewed before, it would therefore be very useful to have other editors opinion on the article. There are several editors that are willing to address any issues that may arise / make the necessary alterations to improve the quality of this article which addresses an important area of modern clinical psychology.
cheers,
Guerillero |
My Talk
03:10, 9 February 2011 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This is very good, seems comprehensive to a non-expert (me), and well-supported. I see some overlinking and some problems with pronouns but otherwise not much to grumble about. Here are my suggestions:
Overlinking
Heads and subheads
Lead
Classification
Signs and symptoms
Mental illness
Pathophysiology
Self-harm awareness
Avoidance techniques
Images
References
Further reading
Other
Please make sure that the existing text includes no copyright violations, plagiarism, or close paraphrasing. For more information on this please see Wikipedia:Wikipedia_Signpost/2009-04-13/Dispatches. (This is a general warning given in view of previous problems that have risen over copyvios.)
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 20:31, 16 February 2011 (UTC)