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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm curious to see how far this article is away from
featured article status. It's passed as a good article nominee recently, and
the reviewer noted that some of the sources weren't "great", but that their usage was fine and non-controversial. As far as I known I've employed every reliable source, both in web and in print, which covers the show significantly—which isn't a whole lot. The series sort of came and went, and so critical reception is sparse (a whole three sentences are devoted to this).
23W
03:34, 16 November 2014 (UTC)
Thanks, 23W 03:34, 16 November 2014 (UTC)
Here's some thoughts and suggestions:
The show received multiple accolades, with
Robert Ryan Cory and Chris Tsirgiotis both winning awards for "Outstanding Individual in Animation" at the
64th Primetime Emmy Awards ceremony.
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23WSlog (Steve Little), a black-furred monster, is likewise blindly loyal, but lacks critical judgement skills—the more hazardous something is, the more likely he will be to follow it.
. Maybe clunkier, but less vague.
23W
21:33, 6 December 2014 (UTC)Both were produced at
Cartoon Network Studios.
23WHopefully, these ideas and suggestions will come in useful. Honestly, I think the best thing you could do is get someone to peer-edit it.-- Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:19, 17 November 2014 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm curious to see how far this article is away from
featured article status. It's passed as a good article nominee recently, and
the reviewer noted that some of the sources weren't "great", but that their usage was fine and non-controversial. As far as I known I've employed every reliable source, both in web and in print, which covers the show significantly—which isn't a whole lot. The series sort of came and went, and so critical reception is sparse (a whole three sentences are devoted to this).
23W
03:34, 16 November 2014 (UTC)
Thanks, 23W 03:34, 16 November 2014 (UTC)
Here's some thoughts and suggestions:
The show received multiple accolades, with
Robert Ryan Cory and Chris Tsirgiotis both winning awards for "Outstanding Individual in Animation" at the
64th Primetime Emmy Awards ceremony.
.
23WSlog (Steve Little), a black-furred monster, is likewise blindly loyal, but lacks critical judgement skills—the more hazardous something is, the more likely he will be to follow it.
. Maybe clunkier, but less vague.
23W
21:33, 6 December 2014 (UTC)Both were produced at
Cartoon Network Studios.
23WHopefully, these ideas and suggestions will come in useful. Honestly, I think the best thing you could do is get someone to peer-edit it.-- Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:19, 17 November 2014 (UTC)