I think this is an excellent article and would like to move towards making it a featured article.
Ideogram 23:17, 29 May 2006 (UTC)reply
I have fixed the nomination, will be back in a couple of minutes with suggestions.
AndyZ 23:43, 29 May 2006 (UTC)reply
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Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
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I have tagged the statements requiring citations. I hope other people will help me fill them out.
Ideogram 18:06, 27 June 2006 (UTC)reply
All quotations should have
WP:FOOTNOTEs or other forms of inline citations.
I think this is an excellent article and would like to move towards making it a featured article.
Ideogram 23:17, 29 May 2006 (UTC)reply
I have fixed the nomination, will be back in a couple of minutes with suggestions.
AndyZ 23:43, 29 May 2006 (UTC)reply
The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. For an article of this length, the lead should contain 2-3 paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
Per
WP:MOS, the first letters of words in heading should not be capitalized unless: 1) it is a
proper noun or 2) it is the first word of the heading. (mainly: Hello World)
Please provide
WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also
WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{
Cite web}} and {{
Cite book}} may be useful here.
This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>.
I have tagged the statements requiring citations. I hope other people will help me fill them out.
Ideogram 18:06, 27 June 2006 (UTC)reply
All quotations should have
WP:FOOTNOTEs or other forms of inline citations.