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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to eventually take this article to
GA status, and am interested in receiving feedback on what this article needs to bring it up to the
GA level. I appreciate any and all constructive comments and suggestions.
Thanks, @Kate (talk) 06:56, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
These are just my thoughts. I have no idea about the person the article is about, so maybe as a "new reader" I can provide a different view.
You will probably want to find the exact pages to wikilink to:
Overall the {{cite}} tags should come after the punctuation marks in a sentences; change reference 3 for example! Check the other references for the same edit. Also, find references for the Citation needed tag.
Biography I would suggest removing the header Biography and replacing it with Career instead. This article is already a biography and that seems redundant.
Career 1980s
1990s
2000 to the Present Change the header to 2000-present?
Personal life You will probably want to make this a section that isn't a subsection of Career. It maybe better to have it go before her Career section so a new reader of this performer can read about her background before reading about her career.
Theatre Credits/Discography These sections will need more references.
Anyway, these are my suggestions for this article! on camera (t) 04:19, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to eventually take this article to
GA status, and am interested in receiving feedback on what this article needs to bring it up to the
GA level. I appreciate any and all constructive comments and suggestions.
Thanks, @Kate (talk) 06:56, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
These are just my thoughts. I have no idea about the person the article is about, so maybe as a "new reader" I can provide a different view.
You will probably want to find the exact pages to wikilink to:
Overall the {{cite}} tags should come after the punctuation marks in a sentences; change reference 3 for example! Check the other references for the same edit. Also, find references for the Citation needed tag.
Biography I would suggest removing the header Biography and replacing it with Career instead. This article is already a biography and that seems redundant.
Career 1980s
1990s
2000 to the Present Change the header to 2000-present?
Personal life You will probably want to make this a section that isn't a subsection of Career. It maybe better to have it go before her Career section so a new reader of this performer can read about her background before reading about her career.
Theatre Credits/Discography These sections will need more references.
Anyway, these are my suggestions for this article! on camera (t) 04:19, 26 November 2009 (UTC)