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I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to nominate it for GA status. I really hard worked on it, and improved it, from article in within 2-3 sentences from a section, to an article that kinda deserves to be chosen for Good. Also, thanks to the
User:Pixelyoshi, who web cited some of the references. I would be greatful to the user that can peer review the article.
"Its composition defines a different pace from Rihanna's previous singles." - what does this mean? Try to avoid vague and subjective statements, except for reviews
"The song hqas a strong chorus and a bridge, which is pulled by strong vocals." - phrasing's a bit strange here, and "strong" shouldn't be repeated. Try to avoid excessive repetition where possible
File:Russian_Roulette_video_shot.jpg needs a much stronger fair-use rationale. Try looking at music video screenshots on music
GAs or
FAs to get an idea of what's required here
Try to maintain a neutral and encyclopedic tone at all times - see
WP:TONE
Done
"the single is a bad Céline Dion song with barrel-turning revolver noises that actually sound like a can of spray paint being shook up" - is this a direct quote from the source? If not, needs to be reworded; if so, should have quotation marks
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to nominate it for GA status. I really hard worked on it, and improved it, from article in within 2-3 sentences from a section, to an article that kinda deserves to be chosen for Good. Also, thanks to the
User:Pixelyoshi, who web cited some of the references. I would be greatful to the user that can peer review the article.
"Its composition defines a different pace from Rihanna's previous singles." - what does this mean? Try to avoid vague and subjective statements, except for reviews
"The song hqas a strong chorus and a bridge, which is pulled by strong vocals." - phrasing's a bit strange here, and "strong" shouldn't be repeated. Try to avoid excessive repetition where possible
File:Russian_Roulette_video_shot.jpg needs a much stronger fair-use rationale. Try looking at music video screenshots on music
GAs or
FAs to get an idea of what's required here
Try to maintain a neutral and encyclopedic tone at all times - see
WP:TONE
Done
"the single is a bad Céline Dion song with barrel-turning revolver noises that actually sound like a can of spray paint being shook up" - is this a direct quote from the source? If not, needs to be reworded; if so, should have quotation marks