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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it up to featured article status and would like to know what changes/improvements it might need. My plan is to get it ready for consideration either for the World Blind Football Championships in August, or the 2012 Paralympic Games, both events in which the college has a role.
Thanks, Paul Largo ( talk) 21:07, 16 January 2010 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments: I haven't had time to check out the prose, but here are a couple of issues that require attention
Also, from a glance I saw "principles" in the lead instead of "principals". And the geographical coordinates of the college appear twice, once in the infobox and once above it. While such coordinates might be useful in articles dealing with remote corners of the world, for towns in heavily populated areas they are completely pointless. I suggest knock both of them out.
If I can find time, I'll try and make some comments on the prose. Brianboulton ( talk) 13:10, 24 January 2010 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it up to featured article status and would like to know what changes/improvements it might need. My plan is to get it ready for consideration either for the World Blind Football Championships in August, or the 2012 Paralympic Games, both events in which the college has a role.
Thanks, Paul Largo ( talk) 21:07, 16 January 2010 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments: I haven't had time to check out the prose, but here are a couple of issues that require attention
Also, from a glance I saw "principles" in the lead instead of "principals". And the geographical coordinates of the college appear twice, once in the infobox and once above it. While such coordinates might be useful in articles dealing with remote corners of the world, for towns in heavily populated areas they are completely pointless. I suggest knock both of them out.
If I can find time, I'll try and make some comments on the prose. Brianboulton ( talk) 13:10, 24 January 2010 (UTC)