I have completely written this article in the past fortnight using a variety of sources. Welensky is a somewhat controversial figure in the decline of colonisation. Help would be appreciated regarding the standardisation of terms relating to Africans to ensure neutrality.
The article looks good. Very informative, and I don't see any major
WP:MOS issues. Doesn't seem to be any licensing issues with the images on the article. Here are a few minor suggestions:
Welensky described himself as "half Jewish, half Afrikaner and 100% British". - Is there a source for this?
The first paragraph of the "Amalgamation and federation" section might need some footnoting/sources.
Link the dates in the Notes according to
WP:MOSDATE so they'll appear according to user preference.
A big thank you for going above and beyond and managing to delve through the mess of PR's to leave a comment! Exceptional work my friend! I've read your comments, and will add some refs, and see about fixing up the dates. Regards Welensky's love for Albion, it's going to be a rough trip finding a reference, which is unfortunate, since I'll have to take that line out if I don't find one.
Michaeltalk13:11, 4 June 2007 (UTC)reply
No need to thank me. I put in a request myself for an article I had worked on, so I thought I'd take the time to look over an existing request here. Just use your best judgement on whether or not to take out texts. I am by no means an absolute authority on these things. I'm only offering my humble suggestions.
Hong Qi Gong (
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15:20, 4 June 2007 (UTC)reply
I have completely written this article in the past fortnight using a variety of sources. Welensky is a somewhat controversial figure in the decline of colonisation. Help would be appreciated regarding the standardisation of terms relating to Africans to ensure neutrality.
The article looks good. Very informative, and I don't see any major
WP:MOS issues. Doesn't seem to be any licensing issues with the images on the article. Here are a few minor suggestions:
Welensky described himself as "half Jewish, half Afrikaner and 100% British". - Is there a source for this?
The first paragraph of the "Amalgamation and federation" section might need some footnoting/sources.
Link the dates in the Notes according to
WP:MOSDATE so they'll appear according to user preference.
A big thank you for going above and beyond and managing to delve through the mess of PR's to leave a comment! Exceptional work my friend! I've read your comments, and will add some refs, and see about fixing up the dates. Regards Welensky's love for Albion, it's going to be a rough trip finding a reference, which is unfortunate, since I'll have to take that line out if I don't find one.
Michaeltalk13:11, 4 June 2007 (UTC)reply
No need to thank me. I put in a request myself for an article I had worked on, so I thought I'd take the time to look over an existing request here. Just use your best judgement on whether or not to take out texts. I am by no means an absolute authority on these things. I'm only offering my humble suggestions.
Hong Qi Gong (
Talk -
Contribs)
15:20, 4 June 2007 (UTC)reply