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Rodrigues Rail

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to know if could become a Good Article, and seewhat improvement it would need for this. There is very little info about this bird available, since it is very badly known. I expanded the description and created a taxonomy section, added an intro and the only known contemporary descriptions of the bird. The extinction and behaviour sections are left much as they were (apart from citations I added), since they're basically just summaries of the old accounts.

Thanks, FunkMonk ( talk) 15:22, 11 August 2012 (UTC) reply

  • "The Rodrigues Rail or Leguat's Gelinote (Erythromachus leguati) is an extinct flightlessrail." What is a rail? Please define. ~ EDDY ( talk/ contribs)~ 21:13, 26 August 2012 (UTC) reply
  • What is mottling or vermiculations? ~ EDDY ( talk/ contribs)~ 21:19, 26 August 2012 (UTC) reply
Is a wikilink not enough? I'll rephrase the colour sentence. Do you think there is enough info here for a GA? Not much more in the sources, it is a very obscure bird. FunkMonk ( talk) 22:57, 27 August 2012 (UTC) reply
It would be good for the casual reader to understand what they are without looking at other articles. Yes there is plenty enough for a GA, just not an FA. ~ EDDY ( talk/ contribs)~ 01:48, 28 August 2012 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Rodrigues Rail

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to know if could become a Good Article, and seewhat improvement it would need for this. There is very little info about this bird available, since it is very badly known. I expanded the description and created a taxonomy section, added an intro and the only known contemporary descriptions of the bird. The extinction and behaviour sections are left much as they were (apart from citations I added), since they're basically just summaries of the old accounts.

Thanks, FunkMonk ( talk) 15:22, 11 August 2012 (UTC) reply

  • "The Rodrigues Rail or Leguat's Gelinote (Erythromachus leguati) is an extinct flightlessrail." What is a rail? Please define. ~ EDDY ( talk/ contribs)~ 21:13, 26 August 2012 (UTC) reply
  • What is mottling or vermiculations? ~ EDDY ( talk/ contribs)~ 21:19, 26 August 2012 (UTC) reply
Is a wikilink not enough? I'll rephrase the colour sentence. Do you think there is enough info here for a GA? Not much more in the sources, it is a very obscure bird. FunkMonk ( talk) 22:57, 27 August 2012 (UTC) reply
It would be good for the casual reader to understand what they are without looking at other articles. Yes there is plenty enough for a GA, just not an FA. ~ EDDY ( talk/ contribs)~ 01:48, 28 August 2012 (UTC) reply

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