This peer review discussion has been closed.
This article was recently separated out from its main article
Nationalism. Of primary importance now is adding citations and increasing the worldwide view.
Furthermore, the text has been written by a university class in their first foray into using WP as a teaching tool. I would like them to see the value of the wiki-method and how we can help improve their work.
Best, Witty Lama 04:43, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: Interesting article that needs a fair amount of work to conform to Wikipedia's Manual of Style better. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
The article is quite short as is - the good news is that it should fairly easy to expand. The bad news is I've run out of suggestions - hope these help, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 09:13, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
This article was recently separated out from its main article
Nationalism. Of primary importance now is adding citations and increasing the worldwide view.
Furthermore, the text has been written by a university class in their first foray into using WP as a teaching tool. I would like them to see the value of the wiki-method and how we can help improve their work.
Best, Witty Lama 04:43, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: Interesting article that needs a fair amount of work to conform to Wikipedia's Manual of Style better. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
The article is quite short as is - the good news is that it should fairly easy to expand. The bad news is I've run out of suggestions - hope these help, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 09:13, 29 April 2008 (UTC)