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I've listed this article for peer review because I have recently added a lot of information, and feel that the quality of the article may have increased. I want total honesty on everything from organization down to grammar.
Thanks, speednat ( talk) 16:11, 29 January 2009 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: , here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:27, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I have recently added a lot of information, and feel that the quality of the article may have increased. I want total honesty on everything from organization down to grammar.
Thanks, speednat ( talk) 16:11, 29 January 2009 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: , here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:27, 4 February 2009 (UTC)