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I've listed this article for peer review because it has just been listed as a good article, and another editor has suggested that it might be close to the requirements for featured article status. Therefore, I would like this review to look for issues with the article meeting this criteria ahead of it being nominiated for FA status. Thanks --
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08:43, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
Comments by Doncram The article looks good to me. The early link to deorbit goes to Orbit (disambiguation) which includes "deorbit" in bold, but which does not directly define what "deorbit" means. Orbit is primarily a noun. "Deorbit" is presumably a verb, and the verb should be defined where the article links to. Hope this helps in a small way. :) doncram ( talk) 19:44, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: Sorry to take so long on this. I think it looks pretty good, but still needs some work before FAC. With WP:WIAFA in mind, here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). I do not watch poeer reviews, so if you have questions or comments, please contact me on my talk page. Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 03:38, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because it has just been listed as a good article, and another editor has suggested that it might be close to the requirements for featured article status. Therefore, I would like this review to look for issues with the article meeting this criteria ahead of it being nominiated for FA status. Thanks --
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W
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08:43, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
Comments by Doncram The article looks good to me. The early link to deorbit goes to Orbit (disambiguation) which includes "deorbit" in bold, but which does not directly define what "deorbit" means. Orbit is primarily a noun. "Deorbit" is presumably a verb, and the verb should be defined where the article links to. Hope this helps in a small way. :) doncram ( talk) 19:44, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: Sorry to take so long on this. I think it looks pretty good, but still needs some work before FAC. With WP:WIAFA in mind, here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). I do not watch poeer reviews, so if you have questions or comments, please contact me on my talk page. Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 03:38, 13 August 2009 (UTC)