Pretty Girl Rock

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it to GA status. Comments about improvements for the article are more than welcome.

Thanks, Ozurbanmusic ( talk) 05:36, 27 January 2011 (UTC) reply

Hi, Ozurbanmusic, I'll review this article. I enjoyed my first reader through, but I'll review according the GA criteria. -- Philcha ( talk) 11:20, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply

I'll use Wikipedia:WikiProject Songs as a checklist where appropriate. -- Philcha ( talk) 11:31, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply

I think the comments I've made so far may imply changes to the structure, so please respond these. -- Philcha ( talk) 12:53, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply

Coverage

• Nothing about conception (where the idea came from and by whom) before (first) production. -- Philcha ( talk) 12:46, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply
• Section "Composition and critical reception" has nothing about composition. If there is "Composition" info, I'd expect it early in "Background and release". -- Philcha ( talk) 12:46, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply
• Any variations in composition, arrangement, etc. between performances, e.g. many singers use easier versions for live than for recorded, or the album may have improvements over the single? I note Hilson gave a remixed version of "Pretty Girl Rock" on the Lopez Tonight and a Motown-themed performance for the Late Night with David Letterman, and more in section "Track listing". -- Philcha ( talk) 12:46, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply

Structure

Infobox

• The Infobox has no citations and the info in the box is not supported by main text that has citations. -- Philcha ( talk) 11:51, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply
• The Infobox says the only format is Digital download. Was there no CD / DVD of the single or the album No Boys Allowed? I note that there's a cover for the single, and there's a booklet of No Boys Allowed. If there are multiple formats, I suggest detail in the main text and summary in the Infobox. -- Philcha ( talk) 12:46, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply

(sections of the article)

Personnel

• Instead of "Sources" at the end, I suggest at the top e.g. "Album notes for No Boys Allowed (with citation):" -- Philcha ( talk) 12:46, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply
• Any personnel changes for other versions? -- Philcha ( talk) 12:46, 3 February 2011 (UTC) reply

Images

Check for dead links and DAB links

Lead (I review the lead last in case any of the main text has changed)