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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm thinking of nominating it for GA. I'm looking for any comments or suggestions either relating to the GA criteria or for improving the article in general, to make it the best I can. I think the structure's ok compared to other similar articles. I'm looking in particular for comments regarding the prose and possible areas for expansion.
Thanks, Beloved Freak 23:40, 3 November 2010 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This interesting article is nearly ready for GAN, I would say. Here are a few suggestions about prose and style as well as a couple of modest ideas for expansion.
Lead
Early history
19th and 20th centuries
Geography
Demographics
Population change
Landmarks
Religion
Transport
Other
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog at WP:PR; that is where I found this one. I don't usually watch the PR archives or check corrections or changes. If my comments are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 23:44, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm thinking of nominating it for GA. I'm looking for any comments or suggestions either relating to the GA criteria or for improving the article in general, to make it the best I can. I think the structure's ok compared to other similar articles. I'm looking in particular for comments regarding the prose and possible areas for expansion.
Thanks, Beloved Freak 23:40, 3 November 2010 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This interesting article is nearly ready for GAN, I would say. Here are a few suggestions about prose and style as well as a couple of modest ideas for expansion.
Lead
Early history
19th and 20th centuries
Geography
Demographics
Population change
Landmarks
Religion
Transport
Other
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog at WP:PR; that is where I found this one. I don't usually watch the PR archives or check corrections or changes. If my comments are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 23:44, 11 November 2010 (UTC)