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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to improve the article to GA or FA status at some point. I've made some improvements, but would like a new set of eye to provide direction to the article. During my first read through of it, I noticed a lot of readability issues, and I've tried to correct for some of that. I've also expanded the sections concerning his early life and tenure as Patriarch of Venice. Any direction provided would be considered helpful!
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04:24, 30 December 2013 (UTC)
Sorry this is short, hope it helps. Edgepedia ( talk) 13:37, 14 January 2014 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to improve the article to GA or FA status at some point. I've made some improvements, but would like a new set of eye to provide direction to the article. During my first read through of it, I noticed a lot of readability issues, and I've tried to correct for some of that. I've also expanded the sections concerning his early life and tenure as Patriarch of Venice. Any direction provided would be considered helpful!
TonyBallioni (
talk)
04:24, 30 December 2013 (UTC)
Sorry this is short, hope it helps. Edgepedia ( talk) 13:37, 14 January 2014 (UTC)