This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to improve it in order for it to be a strong Featured Article Candidate that will be able to pass the process and become a Featured Article.
As of now, the article is a strong Good Article. It has been heavily improved and been molded in the form of the Scotland national football team article (though not exactly alike). The article holds plenty of references, but comments were made on some of them as they did not seem reliable for FA status. The article should be an easy read, and an easy article to review. There really is very little to improve by this point. All it needs is a "polish" that can give it that shine that will make it FA quality.
During the process of evaluation, User:Oldelpaso provided various excellent points that needed improvement in order to take the article to FA status. Among these were:
http://www.ecuadorexplorer.com/html/pride_match.html http://www.eloratings.net/ http://gosouthamerica.about.com/od/callao/Callao_Peru.htm http://www.fussballtempel.net/conmebol/listeconmebol.html http://journalperu.com/?p=859 http://www.planetworldcup.com/GUESTS/matt20020826.html http://www.futbolplanet.de/asia/friendly_tournaments/kirin_cup_2005.htm http://www.worldfootballers.com/player.php/nolberto--solano-186.html I'll try to check these sources on the reliable sources examination of Wikipedia for a more "specific" opinion on the matter, but if anybody gets to check this before I get any response from the RS team, it would be nice if you could provide some comments on these sources.
And that should be it.
However, an important note should be made on behalf of some blogs used as references in the article. These blogs were found to be reliable as its writer, Mr. Jaime Pulgar-Vidal Otalora, is a historian and sports journalist who is involved in the Peruvian sports media and has collaborated in writing a series of books on the matter of football (so the guy is a verifiably real football "expert"). His blogs should not be deleted as they provide essential Peruvian sports history information that cannot be found elsewhere by this point and time.
Thanks for your collaboration,- //[*]MarshalN20[*]\\ ( talk) 02:49, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This is interesting, and it seems comprehensive and stable. However, it is not yet ready for a run at FA. Some of the image licenses are problematic. I also have concerns about overlinking, unexplained jargon, and other issues related to guidelines in the Manual of Style. Also, I've suggested a few places where I think it would be helpful to remove what seem to me to be pro-Peru editorial comments.
Heads and subheads
Overlinking
Lead
1970s Golden generation
Present
World Cup record
Copa América record
Stadium
Uniform
Rivalries
Notable players
Current manager
Records
Other tournaments and records
Memorable games
References
Images
Other
I hope these comments prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth ( talk) 02:37, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to improve it in order for it to be a strong Featured Article Candidate that will be able to pass the process and become a Featured Article.
As of now, the article is a strong Good Article. It has been heavily improved and been molded in the form of the Scotland national football team article (though not exactly alike). The article holds plenty of references, but comments were made on some of them as they did not seem reliable for FA status. The article should be an easy read, and an easy article to review. There really is very little to improve by this point. All it needs is a "polish" that can give it that shine that will make it FA quality.
During the process of evaluation, User:Oldelpaso provided various excellent points that needed improvement in order to take the article to FA status. Among these were:
http://www.ecuadorexplorer.com/html/pride_match.html http://www.eloratings.net/ http://gosouthamerica.about.com/od/callao/Callao_Peru.htm http://www.fussballtempel.net/conmebol/listeconmebol.html http://journalperu.com/?p=859 http://www.planetworldcup.com/GUESTS/matt20020826.html http://www.futbolplanet.de/asia/friendly_tournaments/kirin_cup_2005.htm http://www.worldfootballers.com/player.php/nolberto--solano-186.html I'll try to check these sources on the reliable sources examination of Wikipedia for a more "specific" opinion on the matter, but if anybody gets to check this before I get any response from the RS team, it would be nice if you could provide some comments on these sources.
And that should be it.
However, an important note should be made on behalf of some blogs used as references in the article. These blogs were found to be reliable as its writer, Mr. Jaime Pulgar-Vidal Otalora, is a historian and sports journalist who is involved in the Peruvian sports media and has collaborated in writing a series of books on the matter of football (so the guy is a verifiably real football "expert"). His blogs should not be deleted as they provide essential Peruvian sports history information that cannot be found elsewhere by this point and time.
Thanks for your collaboration,- //[*]MarshalN20[*]\\ ( talk) 02:49, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This is interesting, and it seems comprehensive and stable. However, it is not yet ready for a run at FA. Some of the image licenses are problematic. I also have concerns about overlinking, unexplained jargon, and other issues related to guidelines in the Manual of Style. Also, I've suggested a few places where I think it would be helpful to remove what seem to me to be pro-Peru editorial comments.
Heads and subheads
Overlinking
Lead
1970s Golden generation
Present
World Cup record
Copa América record
Stadium
Uniform
Rivalries
Notable players
Current manager
Records
Other tournaments and records
Memorable games
References
Images
Other
I hope these comments prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth ( talk) 02:37, 27 July 2009 (UTC)