Toolbox |
---|
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed
Outlaw Star for peer review after making several improvements the past few months and would like a little bit of extra commentary on how to improve it further. The production section needs expansion, possibly from interviews with the creator(s), notes in the back of each manga volume (only available in Japanese, German, and Italian), or information from the guidebook, none of which I have access to. Any extra help is appreciated.
Thanks, ~ Hibana ( talk) 16:13, 16 December 2010 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This generally looks good. I'm sorry I don't have easy access to the foreign-language sources you seek. Are none of these available through libraries or bookstores? Here are a few suggestions about prose and style.
Anime
CDs
Legacy
References
Other
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog at WP:PR; that is where I found this one. I don't usually watch the PR archives or check corrections or changes. If my comments are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 20:04, 22 December 2010 (UTC)
Toolbox |
---|
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed
Outlaw Star for peer review after making several improvements the past few months and would like a little bit of extra commentary on how to improve it further. The production section needs expansion, possibly from interviews with the creator(s), notes in the back of each manga volume (only available in Japanese, German, and Italian), or information from the guidebook, none of which I have access to. Any extra help is appreciated.
Thanks, ~ Hibana ( talk) 16:13, 16 December 2010 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This generally looks good. I'm sorry I don't have easy access to the foreign-language sources you seek. Are none of these available through libraries or bookstores? Here are a few suggestions about prose and style.
Anime
CDs
Legacy
References
Other
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog at WP:PR; that is where I found this one. I don't usually watch the PR archives or check corrections or changes. If my comments are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 20:04, 22 December 2010 (UTC)