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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm hoping that it will reach GA status
Thanks, NoD'ohnuts ( talk) 18:26, 26 July 2010 (UTC)NoD'ohnuts
Note to NoD'ohnuts: Peer review is backlogged at the moment, which could mean delays of up to two weeks before articles can be reviewed. You can help, by choosing one of the articles in the backlog, and reviewing it. Please consider doing this, so that delays are minimised. Brianboulton ( talk) 23:44, 30 July 2010 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This sounds like a funny episode, and the article seems reasonably well-done although thin. It would be good to make it a bit broader, but it may be hard to find material about individual episodes, especially in a series that has run for so long. Here are a few suggestions for improvement:
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I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog at WP:PR. That is where I found this one. I don't generally check corrections after my reviews because it's too time-consuming. Please ping me on my talk page if my comments are unclear or if questions arise. Finetooth (talk) 18:12, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm hoping that it will reach GA status
Thanks, NoD'ohnuts ( talk) 18:26, 26 July 2010 (UTC)NoD'ohnuts
Note to NoD'ohnuts: Peer review is backlogged at the moment, which could mean delays of up to two weeks before articles can be reviewed. You can help, by choosing one of the articles in the backlog, and reviewing it. Please consider doing this, so that delays are minimised. Brianboulton ( talk) 23:44, 30 July 2010 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This sounds like a funny episode, and the article seems reasonably well-done although thin. It would be good to make it a bit broader, but it may be hard to find material about individual episodes, especially in a series that has run for so long. Here are a few suggestions for improvement:
Lead
Plot
Production
Cultural references
Images
Reception
References
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog at WP:PR. That is where I found this one. I don't generally check corrections after my reviews because it's too time-consuming. Please ping me on my talk page if my comments are unclear or if questions arise. Finetooth (talk) 18:12, 5 August 2010 (UTC)