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I've listed this article for peer review because…I would like to have suggestions be made for the article to try and aim the article to Feature list status. I am specially concern about the size of the lead, I think that maybe it's too long. Thank you.
Thanks,
Frcm1988 (
talk)
07:39, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
The list is generally good but need some copy editing before featured list:
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because…I would like to have suggestions be made for the article to try and aim the article to Feature list status. I am specially concern about the size of the lead, I think that maybe it's too long. Thank you.
Thanks,
Frcm1988 (
talk)
07:39, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
The list is generally good but need some copy editing before featured list: