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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like if people could leave comments on how to improve this page and make contributions where they see nessessary. The main section I believe needs improving is the opener as its pretty vague and undetailed. I would really appreciate any help I could get to hopefully to get this article to be a FL.
Thanks, KaneZolanski ( talk) 00:40, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
Comments from Wikipedian Penguin: I was asked to comment, so here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope these help. Try finding a good copy editor or see if the editors at WP:GOCE are willing to help. Good luck. — WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 09:50, 4 September 2013 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like if people could leave comments on how to improve this page and make contributions where they see nessessary. The main section I believe needs improving is the opener as its pretty vague and undetailed. I would really appreciate any help I could get to hopefully to get this article to be a FL.
Thanks, KaneZolanski ( talk) 00:40, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
Comments from Wikipedian Penguin: I was asked to comment, so here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope these help. Try finding a good copy editor or see if the editors at WP:GOCE are willing to help. Good luck. — WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 09:50, 4 September 2013 (UTC)