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I've listed this article for peer review because it has been significantly developed recently, and I'd like to take it to GA or FA nominations in the future. It's about a human rights lawyer who has been oppressed under the Chinese Communist regime. Any help is highly appreciated.
Thanks, Thomas Meng ( talk) 20:11, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
- Binksternet comments
- Far too much bolding. The only bolding should be the title of the article, and any other title that redirects to the article, such as an alternate name or alias.
- The timeline format is terrible. Any article that is expected to advance higher on Wikipedia should have its information presented in prose.
- You are missing a lot of good sources, for instance Reuters, Voice of America, Asia Times, BBC, New York Times 2012, New York Times 2016 and UK Guardian.
- Identical references should be merged using named refs. See WP:REFNAME. Binksternet ( talk) 01:20, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- @ Binksternet: Thanks so much for your constructive comments. I've fixed issues 1,2 and 4. Will take sources from pt. 3 into consideration shortly.-- Thomas Meng ( talk) 18:41, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
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I've listed this article for peer review because it has been significantly developed recently, and I'd like to take it to GA or FA nominations in the future. It's about a human rights lawyer who has been oppressed under the Chinese Communist regime. Any help is highly appreciated.
Thanks, Thomas Meng ( talk) 20:11, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
- Binksternet comments
- Far too much bolding. The only bolding should be the title of the article, and any other title that redirects to the article, such as an alternate name or alias.
- The timeline format is terrible. Any article that is expected to advance higher on Wikipedia should have its information presented in prose.
- You are missing a lot of good sources, for instance Reuters, Voice of America, Asia Times, BBC, New York Times 2012, New York Times 2016 and UK Guardian.
- Identical references should be merged using named refs. See WP:REFNAME. Binksternet ( talk) 01:20, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- @ Binksternet: Thanks so much for your constructive comments. I've fixed issues 1,2 and 4. Will take sources from pt. 3 into consideration shortly.-- Thomas Meng ( talk) 18:41, 2 August 2020 (UTC)