This is my first article and, basically, I want to make sure I am doing it right!! I have read through as much of the Help section as I can, but there is so much, and it's all a little daunting. I welcome any feedback, positive or negative. John the mackem 17:37, 22 August 2005 (UTC)John_the_mackem
1. Avoid informal contractions like "it's".
2. Link more of the text to specific sources. For example "It is expected up to 18% of the plant's overall power needs can be met through these turbines." could do with a citation.
3. The last part of ==History== has too many one-sentence paragraphs.
4. Consider restructuring the ==Plant functions== section to reflect the tripartite division and avoid one-sentence paragraphs.
I hope that this is helpful. —
Theo
(Talk) 12:20, 28 August 2005 (UTC)
The citations are quite difficult, because a lot of it comes from my own personal experience and knowledge (I work at the factory). With regards to the one-sentence-paragraphs, I understand what you mean - I will have a look at reworking it. Thanks again. John the mackem 20:09, 28 August 2005 (UTC)
This is my first article and, basically, I want to make sure I am doing it right!! I have read through as much of the Help section as I can, but there is so much, and it's all a little daunting. I welcome any feedback, positive or negative. John the mackem 17:37, 22 August 2005 (UTC)John_the_mackem
1. Avoid informal contractions like "it's".
2. Link more of the text to specific sources. For example "It is expected up to 18% of the plant's overall power needs can be met through these turbines." could do with a citation.
3. The last part of ==History== has too many one-sentence paragraphs.
4. Consider restructuring the ==Plant functions== section to reflect the tripartite division and avoid one-sentence paragraphs.
I hope that this is helpful. —
Theo
(Talk) 12:20, 28 August 2005 (UTC)
The citations are quite difficult, because a lot of it comes from my own personal experience and knowledge (I work at the factory). With regards to the one-sentence-paragraphs, I understand what you mean - I will have a look at reworking it. Thanks again. John the mackem 20:09, 28 August 2005 (UTC)