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Hello there Peer Review type persons!
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm just trying some small articles as I am new to Wikipedia, and I'd like a heads up on how to improve this article. I hope to become a more large scale contributer but I know from little things, big things grow.
Is the tone appropriate?
Although I know the person's date of birth, I have decided to only list their year of birth, due to privacy concerns. Is this the right decision?
Also, my coding may be a tad iffy.
Advice for future efforts gratefully accepted. Thanks,
E. Swann (
talk)
10:50, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Ink Runner ( talk · contribs)
Reply from E. Swann ( talk · contribs) Thanks Ink Runner! Have inserted Reflist and tables... yr help is most appreciated. E. Swann ( talk) 12:17, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
I've done some reformatting on the article, just to make everything be in the right place. I didn't change any of the content. I don't watchlist peer reviews, so if you have any questions about this review, please contact me on my talk page. Dana boomer ( talk) 03:00, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
Hello there Peer Review type persons!
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm just trying some small articles as I am new to Wikipedia, and I'd like a heads up on how to improve this article. I hope to become a more large scale contributer but I know from little things, big things grow.
Is the tone appropriate?
Although I know the person's date of birth, I have decided to only list their year of birth, due to privacy concerns. Is this the right decision?
Also, my coding may be a tad iffy.
Advice for future efforts gratefully accepted. Thanks,
E. Swann (
talk)
10:50, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Ink Runner ( talk · contribs)
Reply from E. Swann ( talk · contribs) Thanks Ink Runner! Have inserted Reflist and tables... yr help is most appreciated. E. Swann ( talk) 12:17, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
I've done some reformatting on the article, just to make everything be in the right place. I didn't change any of the content. I don't watchlist peer reviews, so if you have any questions about this review, please contact me on my talk page. Dana boomer ( talk) 03:00, 12 November 2008 (UTC)