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I've listed this article for peer review because I've spent quite a bit of time cleaning up this article and I'd like to get it to featured article status. I would like a few more pairs of eyes to take a look and give me opinions in specific things such as the prose, are there any glaring omissions, check the copy etc.
I haven't found any relevant, external links that meet Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion. When some are found, I have no problem with an external links section. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:48, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
In the Lead, (Spanish: Catedral Metropolitana). Here, Spanish need not be italicized. Italics should be minimized as far as possible.
This has been taken care of (Thanks). LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:48, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
LEAD, 1st para, last line..Countries like
Spain need not be wikilinked. They are very popular. Check throughout the article for such common word linking
I think it is beneficial to link the first instance of things like this, because they are very important to the article. As a reader, it's easier to click the link than type "spain" into the search box. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:48, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
In this case, I have removed the link while reworking the lead. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:50, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
It is situated on the northern side of Mexico City's Zócalo atop the former Aztec sacred precinct and temple to Huitzilopochtli
Can you provide some context for Zócalo like is it a suburb, hill, neighbourhood etc..
KensplanetTC 05:46, 5 January 2009 (UTC)reply
I have tried to give some more context to this-- the Zócalo is the central plaza in downtown Mexico City. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:48, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
In the second Paragraph, I find a lot of Numbers. Can you reduce some and mention the most significant ones.
KensplanetTC 05:49, 5 January 2009 (UTC)reply
I'll look into these references. The first one is Encarta, Microsoft's encyclopedia software, not just MSN. I'll have to see if there is an updated link to the article. The second one may not be a
reliable source. I'll look at it. I didn't add that reference, but I do think all the info there checks out. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 23:54, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
A script has been used to generate a semi-
automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and
house style; it can be found on the
automated peer review page for December 2008.
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I've spent quite a bit of time cleaning up this article and I'd like to get it to featured article status. I would like a few more pairs of eyes to take a look and give me opinions in specific things such as the prose, are there any glaring omissions, check the copy etc.
I haven't found any relevant, external links that meet Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion. When some are found, I have no problem with an external links section. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:48, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
In the Lead, (Spanish: Catedral Metropolitana). Here, Spanish need not be italicized. Italics should be minimized as far as possible.
This has been taken care of (Thanks). LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:48, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
LEAD, 1st para, last line..Countries like
Spain need not be wikilinked. They are very popular. Check throughout the article for such common word linking
I think it is beneficial to link the first instance of things like this, because they are very important to the article. As a reader, it's easier to click the link than type "spain" into the search box. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:48, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
In this case, I have removed the link while reworking the lead. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:50, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
It is situated on the northern side of Mexico City's Zócalo atop the former Aztec sacred precinct and temple to Huitzilopochtli
Can you provide some context for Zócalo like is it a suburb, hill, neighbourhood etc..
KensplanetTC 05:46, 5 January 2009 (UTC)reply
I have tried to give some more context to this-- the Zócalo is the central plaza in downtown Mexico City. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 20:48, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply
In the second Paragraph, I find a lot of Numbers. Can you reduce some and mention the most significant ones.
KensplanetTC 05:49, 5 January 2009 (UTC)reply
I'll look into these references. The first one is Encarta, Microsoft's encyclopedia software, not just MSN. I'll have to see if there is an updated link to the article. The second one may not be a
reliable source. I'll look at it. I didn't add that reference, but I do think all the info there checks out. LinguistAtLarge •
Msg 23:54, 7 January 2009 (UTC)reply