Please address length of article (~70kb), academic boosterism or other issues of tone/perspective, topics overlooked. The article has previously been a FAC and is now a "Good Article" but substantial revisions have been made in recent months which have remained stable. Previously on RFF. Madcoverboy 17:27, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
- Please see
automated peer review suggestions
here. Thanks,
AZ
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23:35, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
- Obvious\egregious suggestions\problems have largely been addressed. Madcoverboy 06:00, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
- I have inserted a couple of comments identifying bad prose. More later. --
Ideogram
14:09, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
- My hack at smoothing it out is in. Madcoverboy 11:08, 16 December 2006 (UTC)
Please address length of article (~70kb), academic boosterism or other issues of tone/perspective, topics overlooked. The article has previously been a FAC and is now a "Good Article" but substantial revisions have been made in recent months which have remained stable. Previously on RFF. Madcoverboy 17:27, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
- Please see
automated peer review suggestions
here. Thanks,
AZ
t
23:35, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
- Obvious\egregious suggestions\problems have largely been addressed. Madcoverboy 06:00, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
- I have inserted a couple of comments identifying bad prose. More later. --
Ideogram
14:09, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
- My hack at smoothing it out is in. Madcoverboy 11:08, 16 December 2006 (UTC)