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It's been two years since the last peer review, and since then, the article finally reached B-class. Given that Kawada is my favorite J-Pop singer, I have worked hard on the article through the years, and now I'm planning on revising the article more and eventually nominating it for Good Article status, but first I'm seeking suggestions on precisely how the article can be improved.
Here are some of my concerns about coverage:
Any suggestions for improvement are welcome. Also, everyone is free to make necessary improvements/changes to the article if necessary.
Thanks, Narutolovehinata5 t c csd new 08:16, 9 September 2014 (UTC)
Comment from Noswall59
This genre of music is not an area I know very much about; however, I do have one suggestion for improving the article: an area for expansion would probably be her early life - when was she born, who were her parents, where did she grow up and go to school, do we know anything about her early musical influences or any musical education she received? Of course, I appreciate the obvious problems with her being private, but GA criteria states that an article should address the "main aspects" of a topic - information on the formative years (and certainly on year facts like the birth year) of a person seems to me to be an important aspect of any encyclopaedic biography (as long as it can be reliably sourced etc.) Thanks, -- Noswall59 ( talk) 12:26, 12 September 2014 (UTC).
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
It's been two years since the last peer review, and since then, the article finally reached B-class. Given that Kawada is my favorite J-Pop singer, I have worked hard on the article through the years, and now I'm planning on revising the article more and eventually nominating it for Good Article status, but first I'm seeking suggestions on precisely how the article can be improved.
Here are some of my concerns about coverage:
Any suggestions for improvement are welcome. Also, everyone is free to make necessary improvements/changes to the article if necessary.
Thanks, Narutolovehinata5 t c csd new 08:16, 9 September 2014 (UTC)
Comment from Noswall59
This genre of music is not an area I know very much about; however, I do have one suggestion for improving the article: an area for expansion would probably be her early life - when was she born, who were her parents, where did she grow up and go to school, do we know anything about her early musical influences or any musical education she received? Of course, I appreciate the obvious problems with her being private, but GA criteria states that an article should address the "main aspects" of a topic - information on the formative years (and certainly on year facts like the birth year) of a person seems to me to be an important aspect of any encyclopaedic biography (as long as it can be reliably sourced etc.) Thanks, -- Noswall59 ( talk) 12:26, 12 September 2014 (UTC).