This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I think the article is almost ready to be nominated for Featured Article consideration, but I'd like a fresh pair of eyes to review it.
Thanks, — Malik Shabazz ( talk · contribs) 22:31, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: A very nice job indeed and one that I enjoyed reading all the way through. I wouldn't think you'd have a lot of trouble with this one at FAC. I have only a few suggestions for improvement.
Lead
Early years
Young adult years
Nation of Islam
Meeting Castro and other world leaders
Africa
France and the United Kingdom
Responses to assassination
Allegations of conspiracy
Malcolm X House Site
Malcolm X and Dr. Betty Shabazz Memorial and Educational Center
Works
Images These seem fine to me, as do the licenses, including the one fair-use license.
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth ( talk) 04:39, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
Comment by Doncram I'm not saying you have to include this, but doesn't there exist a prominent quote by Martin Luther King, Jr., about Malcolm X, basically along the lines that there may be a role for the way Malcolm X was going, although that was not MLK Jr's way? Currently the article does mention Malcolm X being skeptical about the March on washington. Perhaps this quote, if you can dig it up, provides a useful perspective from MLK about MX. Very nice article. I visited here, by the way, partly to see how expert Finetooth does a peer review. I am more of an amateur at peer reviewing. Thanks! doncram ( talk) 07:13, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I think the article is almost ready to be nominated for Featured Article consideration, but I'd like a fresh pair of eyes to review it.
Thanks, — Malik Shabazz ( talk · contribs) 22:31, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: A very nice job indeed and one that I enjoyed reading all the way through. I wouldn't think you'd have a lot of trouble with this one at FAC. I have only a few suggestions for improvement.
Lead
Early years
Young adult years
Nation of Islam
Meeting Castro and other world leaders
Africa
France and the United Kingdom
Responses to assassination
Allegations of conspiracy
Malcolm X House Site
Malcolm X and Dr. Betty Shabazz Memorial and Educational Center
Works
Images These seem fine to me, as do the licenses, including the one fair-use license.
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth ( talk) 04:39, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
Comment by Doncram I'm not saying you have to include this, but doesn't there exist a prominent quote by Martin Luther King, Jr., about Malcolm X, basically along the lines that there may be a role for the way Malcolm X was going, although that was not MLK Jr's way? Currently the article does mention Malcolm X being skeptical about the March on washington. Perhaps this quote, if you can dig it up, provides a useful perspective from MLK about MX. Very nice article. I visited here, by the way, partly to see how expert Finetooth does a peer review. I am more of an amateur at peer reviewing. Thanks! doncram ( talk) 07:13, 1 February 2009 (UTC)