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I've listed this article for peer review because it's
rated as High importance under Women's History, and I hope that some expert editors out here will help improve it enough for a GA nomination. Thanks and regards,
Cinosaur (
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Finetooth comments: This looks pretty good and is interesting. I'm wondering if it would be useful to add, here and there, more background information about the organization. The movement in the U.S. began in the mid-60s, I gather. How big did it get? How many Hare Krishna followers were there by 1970 in the U.S.? How many are there in 2011? Did the membership rise to a peak, then fall, or has it been constantly rising? Are there bases all over the country, or is the one in West Virginia unusual? Should the organization's main beliefs and goals be mentioned somewhere in the article? I know that following the links to other articles would probably answer these questions, but to be comprehensive (in case you are thinking of eventually taking this to FAC), the article itself should probably include at least some of the background in summary form. Here are a few other suggestions:
Lead
Early years
Hare Krishna temple in San Francisco
Governing Body Commissioner
Images
Other
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 23:29, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because it's
rated as High importance under Women's History, and I hope that some expert editors out here will help improve it enough for a GA nomination. Thanks and regards,
Cinosaur (
talk)
02:47, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This looks pretty good and is interesting. I'm wondering if it would be useful to add, here and there, more background information about the organization. The movement in the U.S. began in the mid-60s, I gather. How big did it get? How many Hare Krishna followers were there by 1970 in the U.S.? How many are there in 2011? Did the membership rise to a peak, then fall, or has it been constantly rising? Are there bases all over the country, or is the one in West Virginia unusual? Should the organization's main beliefs and goals be mentioned somewhere in the article? I know that following the links to other articles would probably answer these questions, but to be comprehensive (in case you are thinking of eventually taking this to FAC), the article itself should probably include at least some of the background in summary form. Here are a few other suggestions:
Lead
Early years
Hare Krishna temple in San Francisco
Governing Body Commissioner
Images
Other
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 23:29, 13 March 2011 (UTC)