This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because the article was demoted to B-class one month ago, and I need some feedback. All reviews provided will be channeled into the
featured article drive for
WikiProject Cities that I am planning.
Thanks, Starstriker7( Dime algo or see my works) 12:40, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This article includes a great deal of interesting information but needs a lot of work. Here are a few basic suggestions for improvement.
These are only a few ideas, and a lot more could be said. If you find these suggestions helpful, please consider reviewing another article, especially from the backlog. Finetooth ( talk) 19:17, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Dtbohrer
A quick comment for now:
I agree with Finetooth, using an FA city article as a model helps a lot. -- D.B. talk• contribs 16:41, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because the article was demoted to B-class one month ago, and I need some feedback. All reviews provided will be channeled into the
featured article drive for
WikiProject Cities that I am planning.
Thanks, Starstriker7( Dime algo or see my works) 12:40, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This article includes a great deal of interesting information but needs a lot of work. Here are a few basic suggestions for improvement.
These are only a few ideas, and a lot more could be said. If you find these suggestions helpful, please consider reviewing another article, especially from the backlog. Finetooth ( talk) 19:17, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Dtbohrer
A quick comment for now:
I agree with Finetooth, using an FA city article as a model helps a lot. -- D.B. talk• contribs 16:41, 5 October 2008 (UTC)