Loihi Seamount

This peer review discussion has been closed. Feedback came via the talkpage, instead. Now with a GA nom, so I'll close this one.

• A script has been used to generate a semi- automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for March 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed.
This article is part of a workgroup effort to improve articles related to the Volcanism in Hawaii (still a proposal). Loihi is currently B-Class, and nowhere near a GAC. I have opened a peer review to tackle the issues, and to in general raise it to GA quality. Reviews, please put down specific issues and I will tackle them; or be BOLD and do it yourself!

Thanks, Res Mar 19:08, 7 March 2009 (UTC) reply

The biggest problem is obviously COPYVIO issues. Can you please point out specific trouble spots? Res Mar 19:12, 8 March 2009 (UTC) reply

Also, do you think that the article covers the topic comepletely, enough for a GA.?

• Initial comments (coming back later):
• The article doesn't look terrible, though it could use some thorough copy editing and expansion.

I've hit about a dozen resources, do you really think so? What part needs expansion? Res Mar

Truth to be told I've exausted myself expanding it. See this diff. It made DYK, of course.

Res Mar 22:38, 8 March 2009 (UTC) reply

 Done More and more put in. Now 24,576 bytes, up from 21,000. I've basically spent all the non-subscription refs I can find. Res Mar 23:33, 13 March 2009 (UTC) reply

• First off, when using measurements you need to use the {{ convert}} template. Ie. 30 miles

Except of the "Squared" mesurements (I Keep messing up there for some reason), that's all in order. Res Mar

• Images should not be directly under headers per MOS - you should check that out too.

Please clarify- do you mean that I should seperate the images from the headers with a few lines of text? Res Mar

 Done Shifted all images into meatspace on right.

I'll be back with specific comments later! Ceran thor 22:07, 8 March 2009 (UTC) reply

Yes please! Res Mar 22:19, 8 March 2009 (UTC) reply

Oh, can you use this table here to tell me what areas still need improvement: {{ check mark}} Y {{ N}} N.