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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to receive feedback on how to improve this list. Thanks! Gary King ( talk) 01:34, 11 November 2008 (UTC) reply

• Comment — Sources look good. Is it possible to expand the lead? – Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 01:38, 11 November 2008 (UTC) reply

  Okay, it's longer now. Gary King ( talk) 02:44, 11 November 2008 (UTC) reply