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I've listed this article for peer review because I've improved this article a lot and looking for it to become GA FA. Thanks,
25 CENTS VICTORIOUS
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17:15, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
To my knowledge we don't have good article lists it would be a featured article list. Initial glance looks good, will look into it in the next few days.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:35, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
What I'd recommend is a large map and to try to feature as many cities on it as you can see this example of England and rugby clubs. Also you do is switch map to Uttar Pradesh and enter the relevant coordinates and then city label. 67 labels on one map might look bloated but you could certainly feature the top 10-20 cities on it. I'll request an svg map.
In the lead, it says UP is divided into three geographic regions, but mentions oh two (southern,hills andmgangetic plain).
Done
It says Kanpur is the largest city, but it does not mention the size, rather the population,is mentioned.
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The third paragraph of the section " Census of UP" starts with " The social and political tensions...". What tensions? No tension or tension-like scenario has been mentioned or later.
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In the same section, first paragraph says the rate of population growth in 1991-2001 was 25.8%. But in the next paragraph the decennial growth rate for 1991-2001 is mentioned as 17.8%. Are the population growth rate and decennial growth rate different measurements? If yes, it needs explanation and/or wiki link.
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The article is on the cities of UP, but the map depicts the districts.--
Dwaipayan (
talk) 18:13, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
Not done Perhaps there is no map named cities of uttar pradesh.I dont know how to create it also.
25 CENTS VICTORIOUS
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15:10, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
Greetings,
That's all for now. These are just opinions. You may ignore some or all of these.
Best,
Tito Dutta
✉ 21:52, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
Done Thanks Tito. But i didnt get For some reason (background color) I can not see sortable arrows! this question.Please be quite descriptive."Population below 5 years" means children's population who are blow 5 years in age.
25 CENTS VICTORIOUS
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15:10, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
I look forward to seeing this at WP:FLC (lists are not eligible for GA and FA), but I feel there's some work to be done.
You've done an excellent job on this article (I look to seeing many more!) and I hope you aren't disheartened by my comments. But the fact is, if you want featured status, basic questions will definitely be asked. Better now than at FLC is what I feel. (Aside: I think you accidentally overwrote a couple of comments of Titodutta in an edit conflict; there's a suggestion about how to make a cities-map there.)— indopug ( talk) 05:20, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for attention indopug.I'll try to answer your all query one by one.
I've tried but there maybe possibility that i'm missing something.Please let me know. 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣ 16:11, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I've improved this article a lot and looking for it to become GA FA. Thanks,
25 CENTS VICTORIOUS
☣
17:15, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
To my knowledge we don't have good article lists it would be a featured article list. Initial glance looks good, will look into it in the next few days.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:35, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
What I'd recommend is a large map and to try to feature as many cities on it as you can see this example of England and rugby clubs. Also you do is switch map to Uttar Pradesh and enter the relevant coordinates and then city label. 67 labels on one map might look bloated but you could certainly feature the top 10-20 cities on it. I'll request an svg map.
In the lead, it says UP is divided into three geographic regions, but mentions oh two (southern,hills andmgangetic plain).
Done
It says Kanpur is the largest city, but it does not mention the size, rather the population,is mentioned.
Done
The third paragraph of the section " Census of UP" starts with " The social and political tensions...". What tensions? No tension or tension-like scenario has been mentioned or later.
Done
In the same section, first paragraph says the rate of population growth in 1991-2001 was 25.8%. But in the next paragraph the decennial growth rate for 1991-2001 is mentioned as 17.8%. Are the population growth rate and decennial growth rate different measurements? If yes, it needs explanation and/or wiki link.
Done
The article is on the cities of UP, but the map depicts the districts.--
Dwaipayan (
talk) 18:13, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
Not done Perhaps there is no map named cities of uttar pradesh.I dont know how to create it also.
25 CENTS VICTORIOUS
☣
15:10, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
Greetings,
That's all for now. These are just opinions. You may ignore some or all of these.
Best,
Tito Dutta
✉ 21:52, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
Done Thanks Tito. But i didnt get For some reason (background color) I can not see sortable arrows! this question.Please be quite descriptive."Population below 5 years" means children's population who are blow 5 years in age.
25 CENTS VICTORIOUS
☣
15:10, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
I look forward to seeing this at WP:FLC (lists are not eligible for GA and FA), but I feel there's some work to be done.
You've done an excellent job on this article (I look to seeing many more!) and I hope you aren't disheartened by my comments. But the fact is, if you want featured status, basic questions will definitely be asked. Better now than at FLC is what I feel. (Aside: I think you accidentally overwrote a couple of comments of Titodutta in an edit conflict; there's a suggestion about how to make a cities-map there.)— indopug ( talk) 05:20, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for attention indopug.I'll try to answer your all query one by one.
I've tried but there maybe possibility that i'm missing something.Please let me know. 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣ 16:11, 23 October 2012 (UTC)