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I've listed this article for peer review because me and my friend User:Bluesatellite have worked hard on developing this all encompassing article about the awards received by one of the most iconic figures in popular music, Madonna. I would like to have some advice on what could be bettered about the article, the lead etc.
Thanks, — Legolas (talk2me) 05:59, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
Hello there! I've just read the article and I must say I'm impressed! There's a lot of dedication here! Some rather small things that I found that require tweaks are:
"She has won twenty VMAs from a total of 68 nominations, more than any other artist ever. She is also the first female artist to receive the lifetime achievement Video Vanguard Award."
"Billboard listed her as the "Top Pop Artist" for 1985, as well as the "Top Pop Singles Artist" for the next two years."
Crystal Clear x3 09:45, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
Adabow ( talk · contribs) Nice work, just a couple of reference suggestions:
Adabow ( talk · contribs) 07:26, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
A very good work but you forgot the Golden Raspberry Award, Madonna won nine times. -- 79.18.84.238 ( talk) 10:31, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because me and my friend User:Bluesatellite have worked hard on developing this all encompassing article about the awards received by one of the most iconic figures in popular music, Madonna. I would like to have some advice on what could be bettered about the article, the lead etc.
Thanks, — Legolas (talk2me) 05:59, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
Hello there! I've just read the article and I must say I'm impressed! There's a lot of dedication here! Some rather small things that I found that require tweaks are:
"She has won twenty VMAs from a total of 68 nominations, more than any other artist ever. She is also the first female artist to receive the lifetime achievement Video Vanguard Award."
"Billboard listed her as the "Top Pop Artist" for 1985, as well as the "Top Pop Singles Artist" for the next two years."
Crystal Clear x3 09:45, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
Adabow ( talk · contribs) Nice work, just a couple of reference suggestions:
Adabow ( talk · contribs) 07:26, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
A very good work but you forgot the Golden Raspberry Award, Madonna won nine times. -- 79.18.84.238 ( talk) 10:31, 11 June 2011 (UTC)