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After a re-design and full sourcing in collaboration with
Lemonade51, I'd like to say this list is done. But it's been a long time since I've had an FLC so, rather than wasting time with what may well be a quick-fail, I thought it best to have a PR first. So... basically any advice/policy failures would be great. Thanks,
Gran
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10:58, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: Thanks for your work on this interesting list; here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). I do not watch peer reviews, so if you have questions or comments, please contact me on my talk page. Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:27, 27 May 2012 (UTC)
As requested, I took a second look. The article looks better to me. I have one suggestion
might read better as something like
I think some people would count a person who appeared more than once as a single guest star, but what is being counted here is the number of guest star appearances (so Phil Hartman is 52 guest star appearances, not 1 guest star). Ruhrfisch ><>°° 14:50, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch ><>°° 15:13, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
After a re-design and full sourcing in collaboration with
Lemonade51, I'd like to say this list is done. But it's been a long time since I've had an FLC so, rather than wasting time with what may well be a quick-fail, I thought it best to have a PR first. So... basically any advice/policy failures would be great. Thanks,
Gran
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10:58, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: Thanks for your work on this interesting list; here are some suggestions for improvement.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). I do not watch peer reviews, so if you have questions or comments, please contact me on my talk page. Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:27, 27 May 2012 (UTC)
As requested, I took a second look. The article looks better to me. I have one suggestion
might read better as something like
I think some people would count a person who appeared more than once as a single guest star, but what is being counted here is the number of guest star appearances (so Phil Hartman is 52 guest star appearances, not 1 guest star). Ruhrfisch ><>°° 14:50, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch ><>°° 15:13, 28 May 2012 (UTC)