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I've listed this article for peer review because I've been working for a while to try and improve it, and I've copyedited the whole article now. I would potentially be interested in seeing if I could get it to
featured list standard, although I've never nominated anything for GA or FA/FL before.
Thanks, Bilorv (talk) 19:28, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
Looking it over, I find the short descriptions all are accurate & adequately sourced. They are all handled as characters, not as living people -- good. I may have overlooked a detail that needs to be included -- or one that should be excluded -- but without watching all the episodes & taking careful notes, I can't address how accurate that is. But after checking all of the entries to see if any one of note has been overlooked, I did find one omission. Or a group of omissions. Namely, the doubles of the main characters. AFAICR, only one is ever developed beyond a short mention -- Stripper Lily -- so I think one paragraph on the whole theme would adequately cover these characters, even Stripper Lily. -- llywrch ( talk) 20:08, 12 June 2014 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I've been working for a while to try and improve it, and I've copyedited the whole article now. I would potentially be interested in seeing if I could get it to
featured list standard, although I've never nominated anything for GA or FA/FL before.
Thanks, Bilorv (talk) 19:28, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
Looking it over, I find the short descriptions all are accurate & adequately sourced. They are all handled as characters, not as living people -- good. I may have overlooked a detail that needs to be included -- or one that should be excluded -- but without watching all the episodes & taking careful notes, I can't address how accurate that is. But after checking all of the entries to see if any one of note has been overlooked, I did find one omission. Or a group of omissions. Namely, the doubles of the main characters. AFAICR, only one is ever developed beyond a short mention -- Stripper Lily -- so I think one paragraph on the whole theme would adequately cover these characters, even Stripper Lily. -- llywrch ( talk) 20:08, 12 June 2014 (UTC)