I would like to make this a featured list. Any advice on how this article could be made better will be appreciated, but specifically the lead paragraph needs to be expanded/improved. Thanks!
PullToOpəntalk 02:19, 18 November 2006 (UTC)reply
Yes, definitely expand the
lead. Per
WP:WIAFL, some other changes will be needed:
Note that the {{tv-screenshot}} states that please add a detailed fair use rationale for each use. See
WP:FUC and
WP:FU.
Useful [1(a)] states that a featured list must be composed of a large majority of links to existing articles (blue links). Most of the links are red, though.
Criterion 1(c) asks for
footnotes/references, but this article only has 1.
Thank you! Almost all of the red links were articles at one point, but all of season 1 got speedied a couple weeks ago for some reason.
PullToOpəntalk 14:49, 19 November 2006 (UTC)reply
Some synopses... synopseses... synopsi... aw shit whatever plural of synopsis is... are one sentence long, while others are fully fledged paragraphs. I don't know which is more appropriate, but it would be a good idea to decide on one or the other: summary or synopsis. And yeah, referencing. Refence two has an ugly [1] external link within it, and I suspect you'll need a shedload more to go anywhere with this article anyway.
Seegoon 15:18, 24 November 2006 (UTC)reply
I would like to make this a featured list. Any advice on how this article could be made better will be appreciated, but specifically the lead paragraph needs to be expanded/improved. Thanks!
PullToOpəntalk 02:19, 18 November 2006 (UTC)reply
Yes, definitely expand the
lead. Per
WP:WIAFL, some other changes will be needed:
Note that the {{tv-screenshot}} states that please add a detailed fair use rationale for each use. See
WP:FUC and
WP:FU.
Useful [1(a)] states that a featured list must be composed of a large majority of links to existing articles (blue links). Most of the links are red, though.
Criterion 1(c) asks for
footnotes/references, but this article only has 1.
Thank you! Almost all of the red links were articles at one point, but all of season 1 got speedied a couple weeks ago for some reason.
PullToOpəntalk 14:49, 19 November 2006 (UTC)reply
Some synopses... synopseses... synopsi... aw shit whatever plural of synopsis is... are one sentence long, while others are fully fledged paragraphs. I don't know which is more appropriate, but it would be a good idea to decide on one or the other: summary or synopsis. And yeah, referencing. Refence two has an ugly [1] external link within it, and I suspect you'll need a shedload more to go anywhere with this article anyway.
Seegoon 15:18, 24 November 2006 (UTC)reply