Before I begin: I realize this is not a particularly good article. It has a long way to go. Please focus on the writing of the article; no need to point out the obvious, saying "add citations" or "add references". That's stuff to be saved for later. This article needs to be attacked from the bottom up, and the writing is always the thing that should addressed first. Kindly leave comments.
TheImpossibleMan04:56, 9 April 2006 (UTC)reply
You perhaps have the wrong forum for this type of activity. Please read the first few paragraphs of this page. Thank you. —
RJH14:34, 10 April 2006 (UTC)reply
Before I begin: I realize this is not a particularly good article. It has a long way to go. Please focus on the writing of the article; no need to point out the obvious, saying "add citations" or "add references". That's stuff to be saved for later. This article needs to be attacked from the bottom up, and the writing is always the thing that should addressed first. Kindly leave comments.
TheImpossibleMan04:56, 9 April 2006 (UTC)reply
You perhaps have the wrong forum for this type of activity. Please read the first few paragraphs of this page. Thank you. —
RJH14:34, 10 April 2006 (UTC)reply