Larry Lawton
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Jewellery store robber turned motivational speaker. The article was pretty much WP:PROMO, so I completely re-wrote it. Would like to see further input on the article. Harizotoh9 ( talk) 21:21, 22 February 2021 (UTC)
- This article needs a lot of editing for grammar and prose. Try and comb through that first? theleekycauldron ( talk • contribs) ( they/them) 18:44, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
- That's fair as my prose is pretty weak. I am better at finding sources than writing articles. You'd think a guy with 1 million subs on youtube would have more people volunteering to work on his page? Harizotoh9 ( talk) 02:12, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
Larry Lawton
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Jewellery store robber turned motivational speaker. The article was pretty much WP:PROMO, so I completely re-wrote it. Would like to see further input on the article. Harizotoh9 ( talk) 21:21, 22 February 2021 (UTC)
- This article needs a lot of editing for grammar and prose. Try and comb through that first? theleekycauldron ( talk • contribs) ( they/them) 18:44, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
- That's fair as my prose is pretty weak. I am better at finding sources than writing articles. You'd think a guy with 1 million subs on youtube would have more people volunteering to work on his page? Harizotoh9 ( talk) 02:12, 20 March 2021 (UTC)