This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it has the potential to be a FA, but I think we could use some advice on clearing up defects in the article before proceeding with FAC.
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Is the monetary amount
$ American /
$ Canadian dollar currency? $6.5 million - $60,016 - and etc...every time currency is mentioned
The infobox image is [[Wikipedia:Non-free content}Non-free content]] add the template described on
Non-free use rationale guideline on the actual image description page for your article. Do this for every non free image being used in articles. This image has an example...Image:Bhagavad-Gitas.JPG Better yet use public domain images. Put in a request.
This entire section has no citations or references at all. Every fact needs a reference. Each paragraph should have 2 - 3 references minimum.
The film appeared on many critics' top ten lists of the best films of 2007:
Antifeminist --> Anti feminist screenwriting-->screen writing
CDs should be spelled out the first time as compact discs and wikified abbreviation added in parenthesis if CD used again in article. And are they sound CDs or DVD CDs?
catalog is american spelling catalogue is british be consistent throughout article
POV: remove or incorporate the top ten lists section, beef up reception. If you're not going to have any information about the cast besides the listing, why have it (it's in the infobox...)
Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (
talk)13:48, 29 September 2008 (UTC)reply
You said you wanted to know what to work on before taking to FAC, so I looked at the sourcing and referencing with that in mind. I reviewed the article's sources as I would at FAC.
Hope this helps. Please note that I don't watchlist Peer Reviews I've done. If you have a question about something, you'll have to drop a note on my talk page to get my attention. (My watchlist is already WAY too long, adding peer reviews would make things much worse.) 13:55, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it has the potential to be a FA, but I think we could use some advice on clearing up defects in the article before proceeding with FAC.
A script has been used to generate a semi-
automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and
house style; it can be found on the
automated peer review page for September 2008.
Is the monetary amount
$ American /
$ Canadian dollar currency? $6.5 million - $60,016 - and etc...every time currency is mentioned
The infobox image is [[Wikipedia:Non-free content}Non-free content]] add the template described on
Non-free use rationale guideline on the actual image description page for your article. Do this for every non free image being used in articles. This image has an example...Image:Bhagavad-Gitas.JPG Better yet use public domain images. Put in a request.
This entire section has no citations or references at all. Every fact needs a reference. Each paragraph should have 2 - 3 references minimum.
The film appeared on many critics' top ten lists of the best films of 2007:
Antifeminist --> Anti feminist screenwriting-->screen writing
CDs should be spelled out the first time as compact discs and wikified abbreviation added in parenthesis if CD used again in article. And are they sound CDs or DVD CDs?
catalog is american spelling catalogue is british be consistent throughout article
POV: remove or incorporate the top ten lists section, beef up reception. If you're not going to have any information about the cast besides the listing, why have it (it's in the infobox...)
Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (
talk)13:48, 29 September 2008 (UTC)reply
You said you wanted to know what to work on before taking to FAC, so I looked at the sourcing and referencing with that in mind. I reviewed the article's sources as I would at FAC.
Hope this helps. Please note that I don't watchlist Peer Reviews I've done. If you have a question about something, you'll have to drop a note on my talk page to get my attention. (My watchlist is already WAY too long, adding peer reviews would make things much worse.) 13:55, 6 October 2008 (UTC)