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I've listed this article for peer review because the page has recently underwent an update and any feedback would be helpful.
Thanks, NoVomit ( talk) 12:15, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. I also reviewed Seth Material, so many of the criticisms there also apply here.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 02:05, 21 December 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because the page has recently underwent an update and any feedback would be helpful.
Thanks, NoVomit ( talk) 12:15, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. I also reviewed Seth Material, so many of the criticisms there also apply here.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 02:05, 21 December 2008 (UTC)