I have extened the article and added pictures (to once what have been a dull article) in a massive construction work on the article. I have nominated the article on the WikiProject Achitecture but no-one (apart from me) supported the article to be extened, therefore I extened the article by myself, added more information, merged some articles to the Islamic architecture, added a gallery and I have added sources. And now I want someone...anyone to read the article so it can become a featured article. Thank you!
Abdullah Geelah 19:24, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
I really like this article and think it has great potential. A few comments:-
You need to remove the gallery. Wikicommons is for image galleries. There are plenty of pictures already. You should expand inline refs throughout the article, and there is a problem with exiting inline citations. Medvedenko 04:10, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
I think the text needs a bit of work to remove some heavy repitition of words that makes it seem to "labour the point". For example:
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[2]You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 14:17, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
I have extened the article and added pictures (to once what have been a dull article) in a massive construction work on the article. I have nominated the article on the WikiProject Achitecture but no-one (apart from me) supported the article to be extened, therefore I extened the article by myself, added more information, merged some articles to the Islamic architecture, added a gallery and I have added sources. And now I want someone...anyone to read the article so it can become a featured article. Thank you!
Abdullah Geelah 19:24, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
I really like this article and think it has great potential. A few comments:-
You need to remove the gallery. Wikicommons is for image galleries. There are plenty of pictures already. You should expand inline refs throughout the article, and there is a problem with exiting inline citations. Medvedenko 04:10, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
I think the text needs a bit of work to remove some heavy repitition of words that makes it seem to "labour the point". For example:
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[2]You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 14:17, 13 October 2006 (UTC)