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This is the second time I am nominating this article for peer review. I hope, I have rectified all the comments given in the previous peer review. I am proposing to nominate the article for Good Article assessment, hence I would like to confirm whether the article fully complies with the good article criteria present at
WP:GA?. Please provide a comprehensive review on that basis.
Thanks, R.Sivanesh ✆ 08:53, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This is a good start but far from ready for WP:GAN. The prose is generally clear, but the article does not meet the WP:V guidelines because many paragraphs lack inline citations to reliable sources. Also, the article does not yet meet several Manual of Style guidelines such as those related to linking, citation formatting, and abbreviations. In addition, compressing some of the sections would make the article more appealing to the average reader, who probably does not plan to be an accountant. I would aim for something much more succinct and well-sourced.
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 03:02, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
R.Sivanesh reply:Thank you Finetooth for valuable review. But for your comments I would have know that the article has so many issue. I will try to rectify your comments one by one. I will not nominate for GAN before these comments are rectified. I need one clarification. Almost the whole of the history section is from a book call "History of the Accounting Profession in India" by G.P.Kapadia. So is it ok if I add one ref at the end of the para? Will it suffice? R.Sivanesh ✆ 11:13, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
This is the second time I am nominating this article for peer review. I hope, I have rectified all the comments given in the previous peer review. I am proposing to nominate the article for Good Article assessment, hence I would like to confirm whether the article fully complies with the good article criteria present at
WP:GA?. Please provide a comprehensive review on that basis.
Thanks, R.Sivanesh ✆ 08:53, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: This is a good start but far from ready for WP:GAN. The prose is generally clear, but the article does not meet the WP:V guidelines because many paragraphs lack inline citations to reliable sources. Also, the article does not yet meet several Manual of Style guidelines such as those related to linking, citation formatting, and abbreviations. In addition, compressing some of the sections would make the article more appealing to the average reader, who probably does not plan to be an accountant. I would aim for something much more succinct and well-sourced.
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider commenting on any other article at WP:PR. I don't usually watch the PR archives or make follow-up comments. If my suggestions are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth ( talk) 03:02, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
R.Sivanesh reply:Thank you Finetooth for valuable review. But for your comments I would have know that the article has so many issue. I will try to rectify your comments one by one. I will not nominate for GAN before these comments are rectified. I need one clarification. Almost the whole of the history section is from a book call "History of the Accounting Profession in India" by G.P.Kapadia. So is it ok if I add one ref at the end of the para? Will it suffice? R.Sivanesh ✆ 11:13, 26 February 2011 (UTC)