English is not my first language, so I will appreciate any english and grammar correction. I need some feedback also though, for the whole article. Thank you! -- Imoeng 11:29, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
Comment - the lead section is way too short (I know - I made it shorter still, but it felt it flowed better with my rewritten lead section) - I think 2 paragraphs would be a good length - try a short introduction about how many variations there were. Is the guitar quite exclusive or not? Is it popular? There are also several grammar errors dotted throughout the article (try not to use 'reach' so much - I can't think of a better word to replace at this moment though) - but I can fix them :) About the picture half-way down the article, what relevance does it have? I can't see what it is straight away, so it may be worth captioning. Apart that, it's a good article and well-referenced. Keep it up! CloudNine 11:53, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
English is not my first language, so I will appreciate any english and grammar correction. I need some feedback also though, for the whole article. Thank you! -- Imoeng 11:29, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
Comment - the lead section is way too short (I know - I made it shorter still, but it felt it flowed better with my rewritten lead section) - I think 2 paragraphs would be a good length - try a short introduction about how many variations there were. Is the guitar quite exclusive or not? Is it popular? There are also several grammar errors dotted throughout the article (try not to use 'reach' so much - I can't think of a better word to replace at this moment though) - but I can fix them :) About the picture half-way down the article, what relevance does it have? I can't see what it is straight away, so it may be worth captioning. Apart that, it's a good article and well-referenced. Keep it up! CloudNine 11:53, 30 July 2006 (UTC)