- A script has been used to generate a semi- automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.
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I've listed this article for peer review because I am looking for suggestions before sending this article to
WP:FLC. I know I am not the best writer, and the prose in the lead will probably need some work, but any input on the table or citations would also be helpful.
Thanks, Admrboltz ( talk) 21:21, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments
This is the first list of its kind that I have encountered, so I haven't got anything relevant to compare it with. The first thing that struck me was that the table is pretty uninformative.
- Should you not mention in the lead that Horizon Air is based at Seattle-Tacoma International Airport?
- Would it not be possible to give, for each of the destinations listed, the following information:-
- Date of inauguration of service (I know some indication of this is given in the lead, but the table should list precise dates)
- Number of scheduled flights daily
- Passenger numbers (monthly averages, perhaps)?
- The "notes" section of the table is pretty devoid of information; I'm a bit surprised there's so little to say. What does "Hub" mean, by the way?
- Could there be more images - a shot of Seattle-Tacoma airport, perhaps, or something else directly relevant to Horizon?
In general, then, I'd say that this list is at a fairly early stage of development, and needs more added to it before it can be considered as complete. Brianboulton ( talk) 22:31, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
- I know its a first of its kind, I am kind of good at that. I started the whole List of Opening Day Starting Pitchers... thing. I will incorporate your suggestions about Sea-Tac in the Lead, as well but with the date of service, number of flights and passenger count, I think that would violate WP:NOTTRAVEL. Also trying to cite service dates would be very challenging. Hub will be defined, but I can remove the notes field and use footnotes to notate hub, EAS and seasonal service, etc, would that work better? Thanks! -- Admrboltz ( talk) 23:15, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
- A script has been used to generate a semi- automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I am looking for suggestions before sending this article to
WP:FLC. I know I am not the best writer, and the prose in the lead will probably need some work, but any input on the table or citations would also be helpful.
Thanks, Admrboltz ( talk) 21:21, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments
This is the first list of its kind that I have encountered, so I haven't got anything relevant to compare it with. The first thing that struck me was that the table is pretty uninformative.
- Should you not mention in the lead that Horizon Air is based at Seattle-Tacoma International Airport?
- Would it not be possible to give, for each of the destinations listed, the following information:-
- Date of inauguration of service (I know some indication of this is given in the lead, but the table should list precise dates)
- Number of scheduled flights daily
- Passenger numbers (monthly averages, perhaps)?
- The "notes" section of the table is pretty devoid of information; I'm a bit surprised there's so little to say. What does "Hub" mean, by the way?
- Could there be more images - a shot of Seattle-Tacoma airport, perhaps, or something else directly relevant to Horizon?
In general, then, I'd say that this list is at a fairly early stage of development, and needs more added to it before it can be considered as complete. Brianboulton ( talk) 22:31, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
- I know its a first of its kind, I am kind of good at that. I started the whole List of Opening Day Starting Pitchers... thing. I will incorporate your suggestions about Sea-Tac in the Lead, as well but with the date of service, number of flights and passenger count, I think that would violate WP:NOTTRAVEL. Also trying to cite service dates would be very challenging. Hub will be defined, but I can remove the notes field and use footnotes to notate hub, EAS and seasonal service, etc, would that work better? Thanks! -- Admrboltz ( talk) 23:15, 7 November 2008 (UTC)